Katherine's Third Response

Luca--

I think that so far you have a good idea about what part of the video game violence you want to deal with. I like how you were getting both viewpoints of people. How some think video games cause the violence and some think that t.v. causes it. An idea I have is that you could reseach t.v. and find the reasons that people like it and don't like it and then do the same for video games. I know you already did an article comparing the two but maybe you should do another one and get more detailed. Some of your citations were off. No dates and a lot of commas instead of periods and no spaces. Just little errors that you could easily fix.
The article on the Leuitenant really caught my attention. When I read the fact about the 10,000 fewer deaths, I laughed. I really don't think that would be true in any way. I don't know how that guy knows that there would be 10,000 less but I highly doubt it. Not all homocides are because of video games and television, especially not 10,000.
Overall, you have done a really great job with this topic, just fix your citations and branch out a little more with your variety of ideas for the topic. Keep up the great work!

Anna's thoughts

Luca, I think that this is a really interesting topic because it shows everyone how easily they can be influenced by tv, music, and video games. I think that your information is very informative and your responses are very thorough. The only thing you might need to watch is your citations.
The one article that really caught my attention was the speech. The most interesting part was when he said that 10,000 homocides would have been prevented without tv. I dont believe it. How would that guy know anyway?
Anyway, it seems like you are finding all the information you are looking for and you are on the right track with everything else as well. Keep up the good work!